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by Namet

schedule March 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait until Draco and Harry realize too late that they have already fallen for each other and there is no going back. They are just so perfect together. Thanks for the update.
person Tripliss
schedule March 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh! I love this story! i just found it today and couldn't stop reading it! Love the story line, I'm a sucker for creature fics, but this was is great because it's not like a lot of the other ones. I love the way you portray the characters and their attitudes. They seem to be pretty much in character, as much as a AU story allows. Great job and i can't wait for the next chapter!
schedule March 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 9!!! At least Charlie didn't seem interested in Harry!
schedule March 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well hey. that was pretty cool. I should think however that Harry would be the one to get the disillusioning faster and be able to fly. After all if he's in trouble he's need some way of getting out of it. Perhaps if he couldn't control the disillusionment... like if he got scared he'd disappear automatically or something... just a suggestion, though a bit late i know. but i really like ur story.
person Elvira
schedule March 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Lovely chapter!

I really hope you update soon!!!!
schedule February 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 8 please!!!!!
schedule February 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
giggles, i love it ^^ heat hehe horny pregers harry haha

~eros
schedule February 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
When I logged on and saw that this updated I actually squealed. I wonder what Draco has up his sleeve for our little Harry.
schedule February 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
harry in a playboy bunny outfit? can i see? *puppy eyes* good chapter btw. more h/d action next chapter?
person SilverLion
schedule February 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I don't know about Harry in a bunny-suit, but I'll review anyways. I think I'd prefer kitty-Harry. Anyhoo, I hope that Draco doesn't get carried away. He wouldn't want Harry to resent him, just when he's getting used to the whole mates/pregnancy thing.