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person Ms_Figg
schedule April 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story is absolutely delightful! A nice, easy read with a good flow. The chapters just fly by. I like the characterization of Snape as well, the way he wars with himself. Ron is an even bigger git than when I write him as an arse. lol. Yep, just want to Kedavra him, the prat. Hermione with another man's child. Wow. I couldn't help but notice you began to title your chapters. A sure sign you're getting into the story. :) Well done.
schedule April 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Pls be Severus baby................. Please! LOl
person Anon
schedule April 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story, but I am a bit confused by the last chapter. It is implied that Severus and Hermione have been meeting a lot in the 4 months since Christmas, then you say she hasn't seen him at all. You then imply that the child is Severus' and then Hermione says it is some boy's. I certainly hope the next chapter clarifies all that. Looking forward to seeing how you finish this.
schedule April 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ah, I need more, much more! Please update soon:-))
schedule December 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
There's that Gryffindor bravery. Go, Hermione! lol Thanks, hon, HG4eva
schedule December 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Defense mechanisms always get in the way of a really good time. Sigh... Come on Hermione, strap on that Gryff courage and go get your man! Looking forward to more soon. Thank you and happy holidays! HG4eva
person curlyjor
schedule December 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love the concept! I can't wait to see what happens next.
schedule December 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like where this is going! Keep it up!
person Angie30
schedule December 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good grief Severus needs to loosen up and take a chance with Hermione. I swear you have a hit a man over the head with a two by four to get them to see that she wants him badly. I look forward to another update I'm really enjoying this story. Happy Holidays!
person Angie30
schedule December 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Liking this story so far....Keep going I can't wait to find out what happens.