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November 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I knew Ron had lost it, but he's just...just... wow. Merlin, I hope Severus finds her fast! Please update again soon, okay? Don't leave us like that. Thank you, HG4eva
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November 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nooooo! I hate cliff hangers! I love the story but I sure hope you are planning to finish it soon because I want to know what happens with Hermione and Snape.
Cosmyk
Cosmyk
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July 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Quite an enjoyable story with a good plot. Looking forward to seeing what happens next!
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July 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ron the villan, great!!!!!!!!! Evil twist that I love.............
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July 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I rather like this fic, my heart is pounding waiting to see what happens next. Though you may need to change some wording.
When Severus brought Hermione to his home. You said, 'he tried to make it as homely as possible'. homely means plain, ugly. i.e. she was a homely girl.
did you mean, "homey"?
When Severus brought Hermione to his home. You said, 'he tried to make it as homely as possible'. homely means plain, ugly. i.e. she was a homely girl.
did you mean, "homey"?
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June 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ron is an idiot and a complete moron to come this stupid plan. I hope Harry and Aurors find them and save Hermione before she hexes Ron into next week. What the hell is wrong with him, he has been a git right from the getgo. Then again Severus hasn't been very nice lately either, if they hadn't had the fight she would be have been more alert to her surroundings.
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June 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
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June 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well, well.... dayum! The title was perfect, the buildup devine, but the end... ouch! Who were these jerks? Why would they want to hurt her? Or is it him? Did they only stun her so they could get her away from him? Oh, so many questions... Please don't make me wait too long for the answers, okay? Thanks! :-) HG4eva
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June 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
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April 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
He is so sweet and romantic ... so Un-Snape........... LOL