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by nekluvshp

schedule December 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I would love to see where you go with this please update when you can.
schedule December 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 4!!! Something tells me Draco should have taken Harry straight to Dumbledore!!!
schedule December 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, well written. I liked that Harry showed a bit of spit-fire enough to resist Ron even if it was a simple 'no' for a while. And I'm glad for this change of scene - there've been a few Draco getting raped by death eaters etc, I'm a biased bottom!Harry fan and you've written it tastefully. :) thanks for sharing~ hopes for more soon.
schedule December 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh poor Harry!!!!! No one noticed? Not once? No one tried to help him? What about Hermione and Ginny? Neville? Soooo need chapter 3!!!
person Cathy
schedule December 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well I hope the next chapter is up soon - it's definatly a great idea for a fic. But if you've been working on it for a few months I would have expected either longer chapters or very quick updates. Please take down the 2 chapter you posted, you don't need our approval for everything you do. Just write your fic however you want to and if you need ideas then ask. Otherwise people will leave you their opinions on your words whether you want them to or not!!
schedule December 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a wonderful beginning a slight bit rushed but wonderful can't wait to read part two
schedule December 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Keep this going I like where it seems to be heading I like seeing Draco though he can be arrogant as a human being who has a heart
schedule December 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awww, I love this story so far :)
I love Angst stories like this one but I can never seem to find any good ones.
But I love the way this is starting out, And I would love it if you continued :D
person Blackmutt
schedule December 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is off to a wonderful start and I look forward to the next chapter.
schedule December 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start - especially for the Ron-haters out there. Suggest you title it "Friends Like These", referencing the aphorism "With friends like these, who needs enemies." Update soon please!