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by nekluvshp

person madamdragon
schedule December 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great update. And you don't have to know alot about miscarrages...I know about them but am terrible at spelling so here we go. Miscarrage is usualy defined as a pregnancy loss prior to 20 weeks gestation, though its more common to have this happen in the first tri-mester or first 12 weeks of pregnancy. Its believed that 1 in 5 pregnancies will result in a miscarrage.
Signs of miscarrage is bleeding, backache, cramping, and sudden loss of pregnancy symptoms.

There are also sometimes a woman will have no sign that she miscarried, and will find out when she goes to a regular prenatal appointment. The miscarrage that Harry is having sounds like a complete miscarrage ( if thats where you want the story to go) Which means that the pregnancy is completely over and your uterus is empty. There is also an incomplete miscarrage where the baby has died, but the uterus still contains part of the placenta which may require a surgery known as D & C (dilation & curettage)

Okay so I hope no one kills me I wasn't trying to be a know it all But I was only trying to help if you needed any information on miscarrages. I am doing a report on miscarrages for skewl, am going to nursing skewl i am. So I just thought I might help if u needed or wanted ne. Sorry to take up your time.

Great story BTW. I love how they all were dump struck when they saw Harry and Draco hug. I hope all is well with harry and hope you will update soon. Thank You.
schedule December 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i hope ronald pay for what he did to harry.
person Hambares
schedule November 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Just found this story and I am already looking forward to more!
schedule November 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Loved :D
schedule November 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was so sweet of Draco. I hope for another update soon thank you for the update and a wonderful Thanksgiving gift for your viewers. Thank You and Happy Thanksgiving.

MadamDragon
schedule November 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story is brilliant and I can't wait for the confrontation of Draco and Ron...
schedule October 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I don't like the fact that there is no mention of abortion at all. Madam Pomfrey should have informed him of his options when he was only 4 weeks along and apparently didn't even know that men could get pregnant. Also, the fact that he just randomly accepts the fact that he is pregnant and just goes with the flow and wants to apparently keep the baby? I don't think someone would want a baby from their rapist, atleast I wouldn't. Draco doesn't take enough responsibility for knowing the secret. If he truly cared he should have told Dumbledore or any other adult that is close to Harry, or even should have spoken to Ron himself.

I do think it is an interesting story though, so keep up the good work.
person blur
schedule October 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
cool story!
schedule October 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very good work here, glad I found this story! Cannot wait until Ron is found out, poor Harry! I am torn between who should hex the Weasel to death: Darco or Hermoine lol!
schedule October 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Why is Harry being so tight-lipped about that redheaded A-hole?!? He needs to tell an adult! Or hell, tell Mdm Pomfrey and SHE will tell someone. Maybe get Draco to tell Snape.