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December 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1: This story has a very creative bent to it. Unusual for a character to move forward in history. I
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December 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oooh. A heroic Lucius. I wish he would help me out of a vanishing stair....and into his bedroom. *sniffle* I like it so far, dearie. You have good grammar and sentence structure, and the plot seems sound enough. I like your characters, but your Lucius seems a tad softer. It's because he's younger and less jaded, am I right? I don't mind it, I just noticed it. Anyway! I hope you enjoyed your Christmas vacation, and I look forward to the next post, whenever you decide to give it!
~DragonFyre
~DragonFyre
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December 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well I like it. More please! =D
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December 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ooh.I like, i like. What an interesting start. I hope to see this story grow. I quite like timeturner fics, and I'm glad you're doing one. I like the brought forward aspect of it. Looking good for the first chap!
~Dragonfyre
~Dragonfyre
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December 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lucius is a hero! In Gryffindor robes! She should be charmed by his handsome looks and great manners! Feisty wench!
Also, Herms is much nicer than all the other girls. And he knows it, our Lucius, err, adonis!
Also, Herms is much nicer than all the other girls. And he knows it, our Lucius, err, adonis!
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December 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh Lucius. You silly man. I do adore you. lol Fantastic update, hope you have a Happy Christmas!
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December 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like the story but am a bit confused....Draco and Severus brought Lucius forward in time but they need to figure out how to get him back? Why do it in the first place? It seemed like it was deliberate then as if it was an accident. Sorry...thanks.
Hmmm - hope nothing goes wrong or there's no Draco.
Hmmm - hope nothing goes wrong or there's no Draco.
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December 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay for timeturners! I've also never read one where someone was brought forward. Draco is such a wicked little one for sending his father in a time loop.
Lucius will earn Hermione's trust! He is no worm! Update soon!
Lucius will earn Hermione's trust! He is no worm! Update soon!
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December 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh hell what a Great start.You have to post more soon.