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January 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like time traveling stories quite a bit, so thank you for writing this. I look forward to seeing where you go with it in the end. I find it very curious that Draco had a part in it. I am pretty sure he wasn't planning for his father to fall for Hermione, but he had to have had some change of heart to do it at all. I am not rushing the story, or asking you to change it in any way. I am sure you will get there when you mean to do so. :-) Thanks! HG4eva
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January 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Won won needs a smack on his bum-bum! How dares he snog Herms? Lucius' chivalry is amazing. Isn't he too sweet? She should huggle him for this! What is Severus up to now?
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January 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thoroughly chastised lurker here - I'm really enjoying your story. Your young Lucius's courtly manners and apparent kindness are delightful, although I find myself examining everything for a more Slytherin motive. I'm quite looking forward to the big reveal on why Snape and Draco brought him forward... Please update soon!
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January 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Question: does he know yet that she is muggleborn? if not this is going to cause his considerable consternation.
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January 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 5: Thanks for adjusting those lines. I can wrap the text much narrower now. YLucius was a total git to Narcissa when he first met her. Why? Did he know she was chosen for him at that point? Typical, selfish behavior for teenage Lucius. So
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January 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Lucius needs to slip her the Amortentia, then she will see how yummy he is! Headmaster Severus is mean to poor darling Lucius. Lu should have all he wants! More please!
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January 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2: Important Note!!!!! You need to remove or at least shorten those ~1~1~1~1 lines. Whenever you make long lines, the text cannot wrap any shorter than the longest line you
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January 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3: Good point about the potions innovations would change the curriculum in 20 years. Eek, McGonagall is throwing Hermione in YLucius
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January 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4: If YLucius is over six feet tall, he must tower over petite Hermione. And his eyes must have been trained on her rising hemline as she stepped over the threshold into Gryffindor common room, for him to see her black knickers. That
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December 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, Minerva liked Abraxas? That could be realistic as after all, Abraxas is much better suited for her age wise than Dumbledurk.
Lucius is a hunk, she needs to be a little nicer to him. He needs love!
Lucius is a hunk, she needs to be a little nicer to him. He needs love!