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January 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The story is definitely getting more interesting. I getting more curious on how Lucius is going to react to Hermione being muggleborn. And how she's going to react to him really being Lucius and not Adonis. But even more what the reason for all this was that Draco & Snape are doing. As for your writing skill, it's getting better. Your portrayal of the characters is good and the conversation being them is working well. I like that you are keeping this from Lucius' point of view for the most part.
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January 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I am lurker and I have read all the chapters upto 6 and I must say its great...please have Lucius tell Hermione the truth soon as I don't think she will handle it very well if he keeps it from her too long..wouldn't want her running to Ron..eww!!
More soon please xx
More soon please xx
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January 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter!
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January 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well this is a great story.I really can't wait for him to find out she's muggleborn.lol.So why did Draco do it?
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January 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Lucius is a dear! Harry is really smart, catching Lu's deceit! Ron is quite the cave man, he can't make her go with him. If there's a choice between chivalrous Lu and monky Ron, I'd pick Lu any day! Please MORE!
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January 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Far be it from me to feed your paranoia :-) Ron really is a buffoon - "Shakespeary" actually caused me to snort red wine (thanks for that). Soooo...how does Harry know it was Draco who brought Lucius forward? Is he in on the whole thing? Inquiring minds want to know...
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January 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So, Lucius before the war is a much more interesting person than Lucius after. He'd have made an excellent Spells designer and at least he likes Shakespeare--one of my own faves. I also like Harry recognizing him and realizing what's going on, or is he in on the plot? And why is the journal having odd pages so significant as to be pointed out? Hmm?
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January 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So far so good. I like it, please keep those chapters coming.
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January 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
yay, love this story so far :D
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January 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hello,
i was wondering where harry and ron were, and now i'm glad i waited for you to get there on your own. i'm very curious about where young draco is and where the elder lucius is at. Having a young him in this time means that the elder him would know what's going on, right? i always hated time paradoxes. i'm sure you'll get there on your own, but i an't help wondering right now. thanks for sharing.
jillian
i was wondering where harry and ron were, and now i'm glad i waited for you to get there on your own. i'm very curious about where young draco is and where the elder lucius is at. Having a young him in this time means that the elder him would know what's going on, right? i always hated time paradoxes. i'm sure you'll get there on your own, but i an't help wondering right now. thanks for sharing.
jillian