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Please finish this.  I've been digging through the far back regions of Hermione stories and this one is good.  Honestly, I just like the idea of a more complete ending.

EXCELLENT!!!!!

I look forward to future chapters.....

I surely hope you come back and finish it pls do so. A very god story

I'm enjoying this story. I hope you update soon. The idea
not one that I have seen before. You have done well.

I loved it!

Time fics can be very confusing--they seem to provoke a convoluted verb tense no matter what you do! Nicely done; I had to laugh at the idea of Draco bursting in and begging her to go back so he can be born.

aww poor lucius... please please more ... later for now

angel

Hello. I apologize for not reviewing more regularly, but I have been reading and enjoying this story, even if I do still have loads of questions. I hope my vote will count when I say please don't scrap this completely. I think with a bit of tweaking and objective-setting, you could easily go back and just edit what you have. The premise is unique and the characters well-defined. Now, we just need to know a bit more about why he was sent forward by Severus and Draco; and what they have to gain from all of this. I was completely with you until all of a sudden he needed to be brought back so that Draco could be born. Then, why send him forward in the first place? I am sure Severus had something to do with it; something about helping Lucius learn to be a better person, perhaps? So, in closure, please don't toss it out, as I truly like it and simply want to know more about them and where you're going with it. I love your writing style and flow, so keep up the good work, okay? Thanks! HG4eva

The critics are some fair and so simply blah! Most of the time we need them to grow and learn, but we also learn how to discard some of them because they have not value or are simply a waste of our time. As your writting is concern. This is a different aspect that you are exploring so I encourge you to follow your outline and your heart.

that was great... please please update soon i would love to read more.. later for now

angel