rate_review Reviews

I love a smart, sneaky Hermione. Thank you.

Charmingly goofy and funny. Draco and family added lots of laughs. Blaise's and Hermione's fighting didn't swallow up the whole story, which would have made the story irritating. The plan to get rid of Tricia is cute. Good exposition.

This was a very cute story. I liked the snarky characters and the romantic machinations to get Draco free, which wound up with Hermione finding love with Blaise. I especially liked the fresh, fast dialogue, which always makes stories more immediate. You told a full plot with mostly dialogue and minimal background descriptions, but I didn't miss the extraneous background painting when the characters were entertaining me with such funny dialogue. Very amusing with characters that I could easily see behaving just as you wrote them. Lovely job.

Jillian! Since you've been so kind as to review for me, I felt honor-bound to return the favor when I ran across this fic. I'm not a big BZ/HG fan, but I must say that this story was quite amusing. It felt just a tiny bit rushed even for a one-shot in a couple of places, but otherwise a very nicely wrapped up little story. Hermione's little comment at the end was just spot on. Good work!