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for The Birthday Fairy

by drowpriestess2003

schedule December 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I would very much enjoy a second chapter. The ending of this chapter is a cliff-hanger, not so much an ending. And congratulations on having your baby-child ^_^ I know it sounds weird, but i always find it amazing how little baby fingers are, and then baby pulls hair and the wonder is gone. Merry Christmas! ^_^
schedule December 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
love it! totally want a new chappie!
schedule December 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Congratulations on the birth :O)))) I wish you and your daughter all the best!!!!

I like this story and I would like to read more.

schedule December 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yes PLEASE add a second chapter!! Lots of Harry/Draco Smut!!!!!
schedule December 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I hope you do write another chapter. Please? Since they all turned on Draco. Harry could walk into the Hall and tell them all just how he feels and what he thinks of all of them. He could announce that draco is his. And if they have a problem with it...feel free to take it up with him...if they are brave enough.....
Being the son and heir of the Marauders..payback could be awesome. They like name calling and gossip...he could reveal all those peoples secrets to the entire school. He could even have it printed in the newspaper. The world got to read about his and Draco's life. The world could read about Rita and the ones who sneered dark or embarrassing secrets. Then he and Draco can sit back and watch......
Harry haveing the map, has to know who has secret tendevous with whom..therefore he also knows who else is gay...or both. The two together probably know dirt on a lot of them.
I love forceful Harry. He blew out the wall to get into Slytherin and charged in and took care of his man!
schedule December 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think you hit on something very real and completely unheard of in the world of H/D fanfiction with Draco and bulimia. I really hope you continue with this story because I feel like you could do it justice.
schedule December 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Continue!!! Poor Draco!!! He deserves a happy ending!!!