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WOW, this is brilliant - there should be more chapters!

That was AWESOME. I admit I read it mostly out of trepidation and morbid curiosity, wondering how the HELL you were going to get THOSE TWO together, and expecting silly rubbish, but you did it marvelously. They stayed beautifully in character, somehow, despite it all, and your writing style is elegant and skilled. I enjoyed it very much, especially the way you slipped it quite nearly into canon, so thank you for writing something so unexpectedly excellent.

...also, it occurs to me belatedly, that there is the potential for much hilarity and awkwardness and all sort of illicit fun when the Trio retreat to Bill and Fleur's cottage after escaping from Bellatrix and the others. Please, please write that for us? Pretty please, with icing on top, or whatever your treat of choice is? ;)

This is an awesome story -- twisted, but full of complication emotions. I really like the way you've written Ron here; he's remarkably close to canon, I think, and Draco is believable as well. Nice work!

Was this it because I want to know if Ron came back.

Oh my oh my. This fanfic was WONDERFUL! I can't say enough! It was SO DAMN GOOD. This is one damn good fanfic, especially considering all the other badly-written tripe that's on this website. This was exquisite. You captured me from the very beginning, and held onto me. The characters were so in character, it had me grinning. You showed the beauty of the pairing - the snark, the passion, the reluctance tumbling into fullblown fucking hot shit. Damn! Damn it was good!

I loved your detailed descriptions. That really pulled me in. It was Malfoy's injuries that intrigued me, and you continued on, to make me fascinated with him, and make me want him along with Ron (and along with wanting Ron - oh Ron) and wanting them to want eachother. Sublime, indeed!

I like how you take elements from book 6, such as Draco being hired to kill Dumbledore. You made him into not some fearful twat who couldn't do it, like Rowling did; no, YOU gave him HEART, which was a much better reason for him to not kill Dumbledore. I love how you make that the reason and utilize it wonderfully in this.

Good balance of dialogue and description, and of plot and smut. The mouthwatering smut...

The jokes were hilarious. I was laughing with them with the Fleur and Bill bit. And the wanking...lordy lordy! and just....oh it was all great. You had a solid story arc, from start to end, a climax (pun intended, haha) and a good solid ending line.

I hope you write more like this, Ron/Draco or otherwise. My eyes will be peeled. I give you my applause!

That was wonderful. Bloody brilliant. Encore!

You have done it once again! I love the characterization of Ron and Draco, it's absolutely believable. *Sigh* this should be cannon!!

I like this story very much too!
And I going to wait for a second part *sits down and waits*

i loved this story! had funny parts.....and also some hot parts. it was great

I wish you continued...especially since Ron promised Malfoy lol

if you do continue PLEASE email me and let me know