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Oh my god....

"And, Harry thinks, as the world sheets into pleasure around him

mmmmm....interesting. Loved the Persephone prompt and metaphor. There are some beautiful paintings based off that myth that I thought of as I read your fanfic...delicious. But why not smut from you for aff.net? You write the rest so beautifully; I'm sure you could add some to a Harry/Draco fic of yours and it would be wondrously hot.

Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. :)

Great story, I didn't say it in your LJ.

It would be very interesting to read a 2nd. story about this. Harry as Draco protector. mmhhh

You know what would be interesting, IF you continued this and showed
Draco's descent into madness OR Draco succeeds in doing what he planned
and everyone found out TOO late at his untimely death in the end,
because no one trusted him enough to know...except for Harry of course.

Continue!!!!

all i can say is dang, I read this because i love greek mythology and wow you have really made a wonderful one shot i hope you will make this into a full on story i would love to see wat you you would do with it if you do

Wow. This has just absolutely blown me away. Gorgeously dark, and amazingly told. This is going into my favourites and I'll be checking out your other work, just so you know:)

Persephone is actually my favorite myth. I usually see it as a Hermione/Snape coupling. Your prose in this was fantastically lyrical. It damn near sang an audible tune. I loved reading this. It was stunning in its sensuality and grace and fire. Absolutely exquisite, the way you maneuver words. In anyone else's skill, the same words would be flat and black and white. With you they are so brilliant that it is impossible to see them at all. Instead, I hear them and taste them and watch the vivid imagery roll forth. Thank you for this.
It makes me want to be as eloquent and sophisticated and lovely as reading this made me feel.

~Mia