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for Fantasy House

by Tassanaburrfoot

schedule October 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was awsome!
schedule October 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You are too much!! I am loving this story.

Everyone is having their turn; one on one. I am looking forward to the "group" sex scenes. And what about the "bondage" room; who gets to be the submisive and who will be the dominant?
person krsimij1
schedule October 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Enjoying the story and hope more comes soon.
I hope you find a beta, I would offer my services, but I don't have time :(
schedule October 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Okay i'm not really into the guy on guy thing but damn.....

Your story...ROCKS!!!!!!!!!

Please update again and soon! i need more!
person kittycat30
schedule October 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I'm hooked on this story! I wasn't sure at first, but I like that they're all working together... of course, that could be the whole idea and Zabini isn't as dumb as they think.
person JanisJ
schedule September 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I can't tell you how happy I was when I saw you were updating again!

This story really stuck in my memory from when you first started posting it-- there is a certain intersection that I wait at the light and then cross on occaison that always makes me think of this fic, cuz I first started going that way when the story started, and apparently made a huge impression, having a physical place that reminds me or your fic every time I'm there. Long story short, I've revisited your scenario many times over the past months, almost year.

I'm loving it, loving the characters, loving the potential it has (and totally laughed loudly at the 'nutless' joke.... :)

I don't know what you'd need in terms of "turn around" time with a beta, since I'm fairly busy most of the time-- but think it could be fun and quite challenging/motivating.... I specialize in spotting homophones. But if your writing is without beta now, I can't imagine you need much more help. It's great as is...

If you're interested, you can get in touch with me at : gryffina@yahoo.com

But no matter what, keep updating! You make my day every time :)



schedule September 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'd beta for you no problem. I love this story and trust me, I really enjoy reading your writing.
schedule September 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was hot hot hot!
schedule September 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You did a fantastic job of anal sex! Makes me want to go ask Master for some right now!!!

I am looking forward to the Draco/Severus scene soon. Who will take who? Will Severus beat Lusius to Draco's virgin ass?

I wish you luck on finding a beta, but I find your stories most entertaining even without one.
person luna4917
schedule September 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
YEAH!!! Blaise is going down.....and not in a good way either. I greatly doubt he'll find any enjoyment in it. How could he be dumb enouogh to put six of the most brilliant minds in the same house together? And what the hell is up with Narcissa?