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by Tassanaburrfoot

schedule October 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. I'm glad the boys are finally getting somewhere. please update again soon!
person cynaga
schedule October 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love the interactions between the characters in this story - sexy and fascinating! Well done!
schedule October 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am glad that Remus is realizing his TRUE feelings for Hermoine. But Sirius also loves her.

I think that each of the men in the house will fall in love with Hermoine. Then what will happen?

Will Hermoine, have a harem of her own? Or will she choose just one and break the hearts of all the others. I personally would vote for the harem!!
schedule October 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I thank you for updating this story. And, I hope in the end, they 6 of them become inseparable friends who take down Blaise and Narcissa in a blaze of beautiful punishment that gets written in the history books. I haven't figured out who I want to finally end up with Hermione, but I hope there is peace and unconditional love for all of them when they finally get out. I think Remus, Severus and Lucius could actually be a good group of friends if they would get over themselves. They would have a bond that could never be severed. Sirius would stay on the periphery and be tolerated, but I don't see him broody enough to hang with them for long periods of time. lol Draco is the one I think I feel the most sorry for in all of this. Yes, he has a few demons to sort out in his own head, but unlike the others, he doesn't have over 40 years of pent up anger, pain and guilt to get through. I feel for him more because I think in the end he will learn the least from all of this. Either way, I want the six of them along with Harry, Ron and Ginny to expose Blaise and Narcissa and them take them out!

Thank you again, HG4eva
schedule October 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Brava to all of you! I'm not really a slash person, but in choosing to read this story, I knew what I'd signed on for with it. lol I like that it's been rather tasteful and hot, even if it is two sets of men who are really uncomfortable having a go at one another. Thanks and I look forward to more, HG4eva
schedule October 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hooray for the new chapter! I think it turned out wonderfully; the juxtaposition of awkward desire between Severus and Draco and the raw lust between Lucius and Sirius was very striking. Each made the other stand out more. Also, given the solemn nature of the encounter between Snape and Draco, it was great to get a little comic relief from NotTooSensitive!Lucius and Duped!Sirius. I enjoyed the way the chapter ended on a laugh. Can't wait to see how the next chapter turns out ;-9
person Anon
schedule October 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter!!! Verrrrry hot! Can't wait for more (and honestly I can't wait for you to write some malfoycest...)
person kto1971
schedule October 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just wanna say I absolutely love this story. This is prob one my top fav five threesomes or more. I probably sound sluttish & dont care I would happily love to jump in this story & be Hermione w/ those 5 males...lol They are my 5 favs from HP....x
person luna4917
schedule October 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
YEAH Betas!!!! This was just what I needed to get me past they cold I have. It' kinda sweet that Draco wants to have his father be his first. I can understand the reason for it, but I think Severus would have been just as gentle.

Can't wait for more!!!!!
person JanisJ
schedule October 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay! You posted it! It turned out great (not that there was that much to edit, it was wonderful to start with).... I love it-- you have so many fans that now you have a TEAM of betas :) It can only make your writing stronger and more compelling than ever.... Now I want the next chapter!!