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This story was so good. I love it. I've never read anything like this before.

Oh my god... I'm so happy I didn't find this until after you'd finished it, because throughout this whole thing you had me on my toes and it just kept getting better and better! For the last ten chapters or so I could not put my phone down because I just HAD to know how it would end. You had me squealing with glee, you had my heart nearly beating out of my chest in fear for the characters that you made me fall in love with (even though some of them, I really didn't like before), you've had my whole body tingling with arousal and had tears pickling in the corners of my eyes. As for who I imagine might be Sam's father... I kind of wish it to be Severus, simply because I feel he deserves a child. But then there is Sirius, who would be priceless to see having a baby of his own, and Draco would be the cutest, most ill prepared father ever. That said, if it was Remus' baby, that would get him to move in right away... I can't decide, so I'll just imagine the child to have five fathers 😉 This has been a rollercoaster and a privilege to read, and now I'm off to check out any other stories you may have written.

Love it so far! I'm sure that my husband will also enjoy me reading this as well!

Good story. There were, though, a few inconsistencies in the plot, such as Hermione walking to get help in nothing but a towel in the middle of winter without suffering from frostbite or hypothermia. The characterizations were actually pretty good. I thought you wrote each individual character well. Also you made great use of the "ticking clock" trope for the end of the story. That gave the story a nice sense of urgency and suspense. The epilogue fell a bit flat, to be honest, but it was nice to see that they all were getting on with their lives together.

Loved this story! The plot and of course the sex! I was sad when it ended, I couldn't get enough!

This story is so well written that it completely sucked me in to where I couldn't put it down. While I wish the author would continue the story I also enjoy the fact that they let us chose our own ending.

A well written, enjoyable story!

This story was so good! I read it all in one seating. It certainly earned its rating but it was done so well. I think the whole Draco/Lucious thing was believable if that makes sense. I was rather sad that Blaise was completely nuts as he is one of my favorite characters that hardly exists in the movie but somehow warrants his own stories. :o) Anywho, I really enjoyed your story. The mystery aspect of it was great. 5 stars for sure!

The ending was sweet but kinda unsatisfying.

Really well done story. I'm so happy with the ending :D I enjoyed reading it