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schedule January 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
lmfao...brilliant!! "severus where have u been all my life....right here u stupid boy". ahhahahah plz plz update soon ;p
person luna4917
schedule January 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm intrigued by all his inheritances and would love to see more about them. This is really good so far. Can't wait to see how the fighting goes and what Harry does to Dumbles.
schedule January 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wonderful just great can't wait to read more
schedule January 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am such a sucker for a super-powerful Harry! LOL Great story. You could do with having it beta read to correct some typos etc and a Brit picker too, but overall this is an entertaining tale.
schedule January 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i love it i do want harry married to sev and remus and draco are draco and remus but if ron really loves harry let him remain a pet yeah but my fave pariing is severus and remus and draco with harry any way i do hope that the weasley's get what coming to them as far as mia same thing but part of me wants all them to pay but i do hope that the twins and bill and charlie are good and if not remus and harry and draco maybe tonks and remus as long as if she on harry side
schedule January 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just love the display of power and getting over on dumbledore. Thanks for updating.
schedule January 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this is a great story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule January 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I do like the way you have Harry using his powers cautiously, gradually getting a grip on them as he grows in experience, rather than making him totally a Mary Sue. Hermione seems to be a weaker character than usual; given her intelligence, I would have thought he might have taken tighter control of her to utilize her abilities to his advantage; her veneality would make her switch her allegiance fairly easily, I would have thought. As it is, she is a weak point in his surrounding group, even though he knows her loyalty is to Dumbledore. She is still smart enough to figure out what's going on and warn Dumbles unless Harry does something to distract her. Good chapter; I will wait for more.
schedule December 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like the Twins (they're fun!), but the rest of the Weasleys make me shiver, and not in a good way. The Snarry does make me shiver in a very good way; I love that Harry can make Snape scream. I feel bad for Snape for having to juggle both Voldemort and Dumbledore while helping Harry. Nice to see that Luna and Neville received magical inheritances too, instead of just powerful!Harry and everybody else being very weak (read that too often). I hope Harry's plans will go as planned ^^
person Elphaba
schedule December 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hot Damn!!!