rate_review Reviews

Fantastic story!! is there going to be more or is it finished? (if there is more please alert me of the next chapter!!)

Great story

Love this story!

its was really good

Great Fic!
I really enjoyed reading it XD! ♥♥♥♥♥

I loved it. But you forgot a few things at the end. Draco already saw his mannor, Harry did alot of wandless magic at the begining, I thought Harry could eaily read minds (I forget how it's spelled= legemins-something), and I gotta say; I feel a lil bad for some of these people. They came to help to help Harry and the school prepare for the war but that didn't happen. Gruellia warfare didn't happen either, nor did the people fight because Harry was going to make them notice shit isn't getting done. Sorry for poking at the plot holes! But at the end with all your power misshaps, I reminded me. Still a pretty good story :)

I really enjoyed the story, but feel it end a bit abruptly.

This looks like its going to be a really good fic, but its really hard to read with the raw html coding everywhere. Do you have it archived anywhere else like fanfic.net or an unlocked journal?

I'm off to try and read the next chapter! :)

This was an awesome story!! I was excited to find out what happens next from beginning to end. If this is your first story, I look forward to reading whatever you come out with in the future. Thank you for a great story.

I thought they were going to get Sirius out of the veil? You didn't write what happened with that. I'm also hoping for a sequel.