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December 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow, it's amazing that Harry can go numb so fast... It's so sad, though. Ahrggg Draco! I could slap him!
Hm, I usually like Snarry a lot, but here it's just sad... Poor Harry.
Hm, I usually like Snarry a lot, but here it's just sad... Poor Harry.
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December 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Gaaahhh >..< You made Snape creepy...well creepier. Hmmmm....I think I'm okay with Snape being Harry's first John that way. Maybe he could be a repeat customer of Harry's?
I have no clue where you might be going with this, as you said yourself that you didn't either. But I think I'm liking it. Also, I love the narrative voice that you've chosen. It's hard to write in first person perspective.
^.^ Keep it up! I'm eager for more.
Btw,I'm sorry, I didn't mean to be rude or anything with what I said before. If it's me your talking about as one of the people 'who are concerned with the boy's profession.' I didn't mean that I didn't like the story. I do. And really, I've not got a problem with them being whores either, it makes the story interesting and suspenseful from chapter to chapter because you never know what with happen in that kind of situation.
I have no clue where you might be going with this, as you said yourself that you didn't either. But I think I'm liking it. Also, I love the narrative voice that you've chosen. It's hard to write in first person perspective.
^.^ Keep it up! I'm eager for more.
Btw,I'm sorry, I didn't mean to be rude or anything with what I said before. If it's me your talking about as one of the people 'who are concerned with the boy's profession.' I didn't mean that I didn't like the story. I do. And really, I've not got a problem with them being whores either, it makes the story interesting and suspenseful from chapter to chapter because you never know what with happen in that kind of situation.
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December 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm not sure about this one. I like it but I don't. It's interesting but I don't like them being whores. -.- mmmmm I want to read more though. And I really hope that Harry's first time is with Draco and not Cedric or some nasty perv. I don't know....I wanted to give you a review that would be useful but I just don't know. >.< That makes no sense I know but I'm at a loss. Sorry. But anyway, keep writing it and I'll read it and leave more reviews. ^-^
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December 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this was so good! I wonder, what's up with Draco...
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December 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
curious. Very curious. :P Update soon? :)
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December 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh no, I'm so excited... He doesn't seem to be a nice guy at all... I can't wait to read what will happen...
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December 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOO! HARRYWHATETHEFUCKAREYOUDOING?!
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December 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I already love this story! So original, really!
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December 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story. I love the runaway twist. I'm going to assume this is non-magical.
Can't wait to find out what illegal jobs Tom has for them. Its either gotta be prostitution or crime. Keep up the good work.
Can't wait to find out what illegal jobs Tom has for them. Its either gotta be prostitution or crime. Keep up the good work.