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for NymphoDora

by BeefJerkyYo

person Anon
schedule May 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Considering she is a magical cop, would she really do something illegal that would give her time in Azkaban if she was a normal citizen (meaning it would be worse for her doubly so since Harry was the victim to physical and mental rape)?
schedule February 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very good story, I love the way you decribe everything with so much detail. Only one question: what does Tonks mean when she says he doesn't like Hermione? I was under the impression he was doing a great job proving that he does like Hermione, a lot.
schedule December 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
nice. love to see more of tonks. if you're interested i just posted a tonks as ginny fic where harry takes advantage of tonks. Cheers,
Oldman543
schedule December 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was a good fic.

On another note, I was wondering if I could use the original wand making methods in a fic I am toying around with.

One last things: what the heck does "...kee your powders dry and your monkeys wet" mean?
person naruto86
schedule December 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It was good but the ending was too anti-climatic couldn't you keep them together instead of the ending you used?
schedule December 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
As usual, good job. There were some mess-ups with spelling and grammar that you probably didn't find because spellcheck ignored them, and the "burping cum out of her mouth" part sort of killed the mood, but all in all a damn good fic.