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by AmoryHarlow

person mona
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i really hope there is more this is sooooooooooo great! fab writing!
person Puppet
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So . . . is this it? This can't be it! I love this story too much! The plot, the lovely way you write, the full focus of the two characters, everything! It was an amazing read. Loved how you set it up from the beginning to the end; it's so believable. Magical; and your writing style works so well for you!
Hope to see more from you in the future--this story or another.
Ciao comrade~
person TiffANY
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank you soooooooooooooooooooo much for posting this unbelievably sexy story!

PLEASE YOU MUST CONTINUE!

I just adore everything about this story; the way its written, the passion, just AMAZING!

I cannot wait to read more

And thanks once again for writing such a FANTASTIC story!

Well done because it is just beautifully written

Peace out and until next time my talented, talented writer

Love TiffANY : )

: D
person Anathema
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*fans self* Wooooooooo! Dayum woman! That is one friggin' HOT way to start off a story!!! God's nightgown, it's just...guh. Gah.


*clears throat*

So....you're gonna update soon, yes? ^__^
person draco_luver92
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THE FANFIC SO FAR. I REALLY, REALLY CANNOT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER! I'LL BE WAITIN FOR THAT UPDATE THEN. OH, BY THE WAY, LOVED THE LEMON. THANKS.
person Jeni
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awsome!
person shalamonde aka lala
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Merlin, that was AWEsome!! I especially love "He looked up again, into her soul, "I hate you Granger."
That was it? That was it, but it didn't sound like he hated her. If the phrase he just said would have been I love you it would have sounded just as natural." Do you have a beta? I saw a few errors, though nothing that inhibits the flow of the stroy. You have a great writing style, and I'm a little disheartened to know this fic is a one shot... wish there were more. Plus, I just have to say I thought it was absolutely hilarious how you had Draco sent in the bathroom FOR HOURS... and when he came out all he could say-- was I hate you.. when he meant I love you. The simplicity of that statement bears sucha complex connotation... I LOVE IT! Keep up the good work.
person shalamonde aka lala
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
me again... I reread the fic list under her/dra and saw that it was the fic below urs thats a one shot, not urs... or is it? do you plan on writing more, and so how much longer would this fic be... I mean.. if they got together in the first chapter... what's left to do other than angsty-soap opera drama? ergo hiding their "relationship"; denial; voldemort or lucius finding out; and obsessed ron or harry? I'm curious as to how and where you'll be taking this fic... do you think you could write me back... I'd appreciate it.
person lisa
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Omg that was so hot and quite steamy. really sad at first but got hot pretty fast. Awesoem just awesome. Draco and Hermione actually sounded sooo close to cannon they could be canon. I love it! more more more please. Please update soon.