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by AmoryHarlow

person Adrienne
schedule November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome! I absolutely loved it. I do hope you continue it. Keep up the good work regardless if you do continue it or not!
person sari_malfoy
schedule November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Let me tell you this was the best Dramione story I've read...maybe EVER. Even though I like variety of stories and genres, this was spot on to my taste and sensitivities.

If you still need a beta, or would just want to email another fanof Draco/Hermione/HP in genral, feel free! :))))
person Christina
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh.. my.. god...please more? I'll pay you? Pretty please?!
person tank
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
seriously one of the best sex scenes i've had the pleasure of reading! keep writing please! fan bloody tastic!
person Alina
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was just absolutely fabulous, I loved it! Definately don't leave it a one-shot, I love the realtionship you've built between these two, the most fabulous pairing in the entire HP realm! lol guess I just love Dramione...anyways, keep up the lovely work, you're very, very talented, dear!
person Anathema
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
If you haven't gotten a beta yet, I'd be more than happy to give you a hand there. ^__^ You can email me at moonstar_75@hotmail.com or through my profile here.



And woman, you'd BETTER be continuing this story!!!! LoL
person reggieb is just a girl
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good Lord. you can so NOT just leave it at that. that was hot and i want more. damn. just write more d/hr smut. i swear i will worship the ground you walk on.
person strangerdanger89
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow you should really keep going with this one.
I really like it
I want to see what happens from here does it get worse do they have rough patches
yeah ok well I'll save this and check back later to see tif there is a new one.

later
strangerdanger89
person iluv2dance
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
FUCKING AWESOME!!! Loved it! Well done and you should definately continue it! Loved it! Please keep it going!
person moonwaves15
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is really good. I can't wait for you to update again.