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by AmoryHarlow

person Verie
schedule August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
At long last an Update.
This story has full of intensity. For every chapter there's a moment of great intense.
Phew, its almost hard to remember how to breathe while reading it.
Please update sooner than before.

Verie H.
person Carlie
schedule August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you are amazing.
and that is all.
person Sam
schedule August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You NEED to finish this. Please?
person **fr
schedule August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is. Woa. I can't wait for the next chappie! :]
please please update soon. :]
xoxo
fr :]
schedule July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
stupid death eaters. stupid lucius. poor draco! :[
love the story :] keep up the great work! can't wait to read moorreee!!!!!!!!!
person Kilalla
schedule July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow, so much drama!
i love drama, especially when it does not pertain to me lol

update soon? yes?

:)
schedule July 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was so good. Wasn't expecting that tryst but it was very hot watching themselves in the mirror. Can't wait for the next chapter! I hope Draco can stand up to his father for her and Hermione can save him! Yay!
person luvhp
schedule July 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you have me on the edge of my emotional seat here!
This is a wonderful piece of work and I'm so glad you are continuing it.
Draco/Hermione=a horrifying wreck you can't pull your eyes from.

Keep up the great work.
person Verie
schedule July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh. poor Hermione.
Well, that gives the 'proper' pair back.
AND I didn't like the Epilogue of HP7 too.
I like the idea of Draco and Hermione Better.
Update sooner than before :)
schedule July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god this story is so effin awesome, best one on here!!!!, that sex scene...phew!!!, even Draco masturbating was hot!!!. Can't wait till you update, chow 4 now angxxx ps. love how Draco has fallen 4 her in that way. you have a definate talent for writing, luv it.