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by AmoryHarlow

person Anon
schedule September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
excellent story! I like that you make it realistic, and Draco comes around after some deep thinking. I also like how you make them actaully like each other, unlike other stories where they never admit they like each other. Good stuff! Post again soon.
person GreyBlue Angel
schedule August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow

I loved it! This new chapter was inspiring.

Please write fast and update soon.
person Serenity
schedule August 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow... I just finished your first chapter... I thought it was incredible, and a little bit scary. The way Hermione felt about having sex, was the same way I did on my first time, How she felt during sex was the way I did as well. Knowing that it just felt right finally, being scared that you wouldn't be what the person expected, not scared about the act itself. Being completely consumed by him... wanting nothing but him. Incredible
schedule August 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
gods, what a great story!
person Jeannett
schedule August 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love your story.........i cant wait to read the next chap.
person **fr
schedule August 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my. What will happen to Draco now?
I just hope that Hogwarts Staff will be reasonable enough for Draco.
And Harry and Ron would eventually be easy on Hermione.

Awesome story, good thing it has been updated. I just can't wait for the next chapter.
I can't seem to predict what's for the next installment.
You're a genius writer!
Hoping to see the update soon.

**fr
person Kilalla
schedule August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love it whne Draco is intense and not some sissy boy

:)
person TiffANY
schedule August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOSH!

What a FANTASTIC chapter!

I mean WOW!

How could you stop there I want to know what
person Extraho
schedule August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
damn! whats happening to draco?
schedule August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow please write more this fic is awsome!! i love it! im glad draco beat the shit out of those guys the assholes love draco/hermione!!! please update soon please please please!!!