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This story has been reposted here with an additional chapter and under a different author's name. It doesn't mention this at all. It's called "Unravel" by AmoryHarlow: [archive]hp[/archive][story=600024185]Unravel[/story] by [archive]hp[/archive][author=1296878799]AmoryHarlow[/author]

This is actually a repost of a story with a different title, by a different author: [archive]hp[/archive][story=600007747]Breakdown[/story] by [archive]hp[/archive][author=1296803520]Cambria[/author].

The original story has been on my profile's "Recommended Reading" list for months, it was easy to remember where I had read this before.

The review mentioning six updates in one week and the lack of consistency between the original story and the added last chapter, as well as the absence of an Author's Note explaining why they couldn't just update "Breakdown" if they're the same person is... uh, weird?

I just finished reading the first chapter: this has got to be one of the best writing among the hundreds posted here. The story is old and, judging by the last reviews, you went all co

PLEASE PLEASE FINISH THIS STRY PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!

The little sneek peak is just mean. Hurry, hurry!!!

Love how it's winding down. Great story and can't wait for the next update. :)

What a fab story! Draco's thoughts...his demons...and Hermione in all her delicious innocence. :) Look forward to your next update! :)

Ok Voldie, here we come!!!!!!!! Wondelful!

I really am enjoying this story. Your writing of their emotions is wonderful. I can't wait to see how you get them out of this. I like the twist of Draco being the one to make the first move and possibly helping take down that monster in his home. Oh, and Voldemort, too. Thank you, HG4eva

Please update soon! This is my favorite one by far and trust me i have read almost all in this pairing here on AFF.