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sorry cant review a story intill its done

good story, please update soon.

Holding a story hostage just to get reviews won't earn you any friends though.
It might even cause your readers to abandon it altogether. Then there are those like me that don't review until well after the second or third chapter.
Good luck though. You're going to need it.

interesting plot.

but please spell check and edit for grammar.

I'm sorry to tell you but it shouldn't be the reviews alone that make you cotinue a story normally an author has an idea in his head and wants to put it into words making it available for everyone to read and share his thoughts and I'd like to inform you that it's quite common that you will not get so many reviews in the beginning moreso if the first chapter you publish is this short, people can't really tell yet if they like your plot or your style. Personally I think I like your summary and the plot it indicates but I can't tell in detail yet. Anyway I would advise you to either get a beta or to read your chapters again before posting them there are quite a few errors.

I hope you find this useful

MD

I think the motivation to write comes from inside the author and the desire to write without caring if people actually read the work. Forcing people to review to get more story is just going to harbor resentment, and people won't review because of spite. It isn't worth the effort sometimes. The only reason I don't have stories posted is because they deleted my account for no reason...

So here's your review:

It's a good start. I would have loved to see the tower scene from the book rather than the movie, but it's alright. I have no idea what the premise of the story is yet because you only have one chapter up. Post another chapter please, and you'll probably get more reviews!

-SI

Your story is interesting; however, thus far, it only really mimics canon. Also, your grammar and spelling mistakes make it very difficult, at least for me, to read.

Liked the first chapter hope to see more

Hi, I couldn't remember if I reviewed or not? So feeling bad and wanting an update on this great start of a story, I thought I will review (again?). LOL:D

Has potential, it'd be nice to get another chapter, see where you're going with it. This could be very entertaining.
Hoping you'll update soon unlike me,
Kay<3