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June 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
really interesting so far, what do you have in mind for the next chapter? keep up the good work
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January 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hey, this story has an awesome start, and I can't wait to see where it is headed. Sitting here hoping you will update soon - I know, my entire life is FanFiction. I can't wait for more
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October 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Update soon please.
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January 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hello, your story is cool! Enter them more quickly, but I want to know what Harry does with Sev!
Lg Sevinia
Lg Sevinia
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January 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just want you to know that your story line is ok, your sentences are choppy and hard to read, and threating to not post because of less reviews is really kind of pathetic. Either post your story or don't, people here just wanna read.
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January 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good story so far
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December 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Your motivation to write should come from yourself, not from reviews. Knowing that people are taking the time to read your story should be good enough.
Also, posting chapters that are simply notes demanding reviews is not a good way to make readers have any desire to come back.
Also, posting chapters that are simply notes demanding reviews is not a good way to make readers have any desire to come back.
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December 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Your writing is to hurried, slow it down. Other than that, I can see a god story blooming.
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December 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You are holding your story hostage until you get reviews? Your story, which is all of one chapter long and mostly a recap of the last chapter of HBP? Full of spelling errors? I'm not trying to discourage your writing. You did a fair job, but honestly, you may need to give people a bit more actual story before you start manipulating your readers like that. Attention seeking in this manner is extremely unattractive in a writer.
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December 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wahh! Ok Please write some more. The spelling errors are a bit of an annoyance but I like the story so far and wonder where you are going with it. Please no more story ransom! ^_^