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It's an interesting beginning, full of appealing possibilities. I hope you will continue writing.

This is very intreresting!!!!!! I keep it!!!! LOL Ok back to the computer... We need more... LOL

Hi,

This is just a friendly note asking you to please use a spell-check. Although the premise of your story sounds great, I'm not going to read it because the summary is full of spelling errors. You are losing potential readers as few of us have the patience to wade through grammatical and spelling errors.

Please consider spell-checking the summary, and possibly using a beta.

All the very best!

This is interesting story so far, and I didn't see any spelling mistakes in the fic, but (some, especially longtime) readers will avoid it like the plague since the summary has spelling mistakes.

Draco and Hermione are told to live as a married coupe in London for one month, [[their]] jobs depend on it. [[Miserable]] they must handle each[[space]]other[[, b]]ut [[amidst]] the angst, will they find more?

Oh, and you should probably remove the non-fic tag as it is a fic. Non-fics are usually lists, etc.

Good luck!

Woah. Ok. I clicked on the story because I thought it might be interesting. But Hermione calling Malfoy "Draco" right away? And just letting loose a "Crucio" and permanently straightening her hair? Not even in character a little bit. This would be a really neat story to read IF the characters were IN character! As it reads, they could just be any characters at all thrown together, and given the names "Hermione Granger" and "Draco Malfoy".

I normally don't leave reviews, but this story has so many problems in the first chapter, that I really think those need to be fixed before this story is continued.