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Very interesting title... I'd read more, I hope you post again. Love, Trix.

I must agree with the other reviewers... I am confused about Malfoy's being in Gryffindor AND in the girl's rooms. I'd love to read more, though. Nice start!

Well, the Ron cheating with Lavendar thing always seems in character to me for him, even canon to be honest. I don't see Ron as particularly loyal, just sporadically so. So this looks interesting to me, but I have no precedent whatsoever to understand first of all HOW Draco got into Hermione's room in Griffindor tower, since he's a Slytherin and a male. The stairs would have not allowed him access, they would have flattened and he would have slid down to the common room even if he had somehow finagled his way secretly into Griffindor tower, which would have been quite a trick anyway. Barring that, I have no precedent to believe that he would be nice to Hermione or concerned about her distress at Ron, either. If you can cover both of these jumps, I bet this will be a lovely story.

Ok 2 of 2 nice move... So as I say before ... more and please let Ginny deal with Ron that is so much fun.

This story makes no sense. At all. So Ron cheated on Hermione with Lavendar, and Harry threatened to kill Ron. Ok. Somehow I doubt that Harry would ever threaten to kill Ron. Aaaand... suddenly Malfoy is there? How did he get there when boys can't get into the girls' dormitories?