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for Promises of Forever

by Ravenheart

person kayya
schedule November 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that last part confuses me..... course it'll probably be answered in the next chap, huh?
schedule November 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What the... what happened to Peter?! Is he possessed or is this some Dumbledore illusion??

Keep up the good work.
schedule November 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i can only hope that sirius fails i hope that severus and james save and protect harry
schedule November 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really dont like Dumbledore in this. And Sirius and Remus being traitors sucks lol. I hope you keep Harry away from Dumbledore. And when are we going to see some hot Snape on Potter action? lol!
schedule November 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LOL I think it doesn't matter who Snape deals with. For all his craft and tact and intellect, he sure does let himself be manipulated by others into working for them and doing favors. ^^

Keep up the good work!
person Anon
schedule November 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I look forward to your next update.
person Anon
schedule November 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A great story, I truly do hope you update really soon.
person dominique1
schedule November 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i like it i hope james fines out that his rich and and inheiretd the merlin and grfy vault along with sev and him being togetheer love it
person evanone
schedule November 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like good Severus/James story, and yours is very good. Sadly "Marauders and the Toy" is not on this site anymore, because there would be 2 good ss/jp stories. Well you can't have everything. Update soon
person Rainbow12004
schedule November 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story.