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XD oh this is hilarious! I want to read more! sooo much more! is there an updates email? If so, will you add me? Emeraldfairy18@hotmail I don't want to miss a minute!

love, love, loooved!!!

Ugh. I lost sleep over this story it was so good! I ended up staying up until 4:00 am because I just couldn't stop reading it! The only thing I'd change is that it was too long for a one-shot. Maybe break it into chapters so that some of us can get some sleep? ^^;; At any rate, the story was incredible.

-HINE

Please continue to work on this story. You have me intrigued. I literally said "damn" when I got to the end only to have forgotten that this was the first chapter with no others in it yet.

Ch. 2 Ugh, I hate reading stories in which Snape is so vitriolic. No matter how well written they are, trying to get through them is like trying to eat chocolate cake littered with shards of glass. It is horrible to wade through endless repetitions of Snape hexing Harry, threatening Harry, calling Harry names and leaping to moronic assumptions about Harry. The only way I could manage is by reading the clear evidence held forth in your story that they are lovers and that Snape somehow got over his juvenile intention to hate Harry because of his father and his ridiculous notion that Harry is stupid.

Harry clearly isn

When I started reading this story I didn't give a flip how long it was. I couldn't stop reading it! I was caught up in the first paragraph and read it right through. I did realize it was a little lengthy when I was forced to stop reading and take care of mundane things--like eating. But I just brought it back to the PC and continued reading. Super story.

that is cruel and unusual punishment to leave it off there. >< Hope to read more of this fic soon.

ooooooooooohhhhhhhh now i want to know what really happened ...

This is brilliant, I really love your writing style, and your Severus is perfect. Can't wait to read more!

Overwhelming. That is ... overwhelmingly beautiful. I think I've never read anything as original (the word doesn't even begin to cover what I have in mind but let's stick to it, for my lack of better expressions) as this. All that must have taken lots and lots of time to create. I was going to leave a long review full of praises and whatnot about the plot and characterization and your vast knowledge of loooots of things, but it seems I've been absolutelly drained by the experience of reading your whole story practically in one breath (or maybe two or three, in any case as quickly as my daily regime allowed), and I seem to be unable to form anything more coherent than a few short words like "breathtakingly captivating" nad "utterly unexceptionable". Thank you very much, I'll probably come again and read it for the second (or twentienth) time.
Have fun and good luck with writing,

S.