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I cannot believe snape did that. i mean i know he could be a sadictic bastard if he wanted, but not like this. he raped harry, and i dont even know how harry had left the option open of further discuss. i mean i wouldnt.. obviously.. jajaja

man, your story is THE best story ive read in adultfanfiction. really. THE best harry/snape fic. SO AWESOME

BY THE WAY MERRY CHRISTMAS AND HAPPY NEW YEAR TO ALL!!!

Oh loved! Can't wait to see Harry break... (I know, I'm mean)

I am really interested in knowing what is up with Harry and the 'Slut, whore, ect' words. He seems to get really upset with them. You think somebody as perceptive as Severus would have noticed by now. Again very egocentric that man is. But I can't help it, he is amazing. This last chapter was sooo wonderful. Thank you for the update. I want another in an hour... THink you can do it? Hehe.
KP

What means "mon renard" at the end if the chapter harry says it.

loved the chapter but im still waiting to see if by some reason severus enrage and pounce harry or he just cant take it any more and jumps harrys bones

jajaja your story is magnificent so far

It's amazing how much I can love Severus when he is like this. He is such an arse but I love him. I'm just like Harry. ^.^ You are an amazing writer. Update soon.
KP

Aha! I have just realized something! I have actually read your storys before! I knew this had to be the case as, in all honesty there are only about a hand full of talented writers on AFF who can atually balance their plot and their smut properly and you happen to be one of them. I am SO tired of authors who feel that 1-2 lines of explantaion are enough to explain the fact that Severus is now a sex god, Ron and Hermione are evil, Harrys a complete Masochist and apparently half the cast are vampires. Right. I looked up your profile as I wanted to read your other storys only to find that I had already read your other storys! Huh. You know I really loved your bunny storys!!:)
But back to my review. An excellent update. We are finally getting to the smutty stuff! Hurrah! Love sub harry ^_^! And I can tell you know ur science stuff. In all honesty its all greek to me. I studied English, German and Philosophy. Haha. But it comes across as very knowledgable and well researched so kudos to you!!( not that I would notice if something was wrong,lol). I was wondering if, when you refered to a witch in a earlier chapter that lived in Calafornia and that Harry had chatted to...was that a veiled reference to yourself?( in an AU sense of course) In some way? Maybe? Or am I totally wrong with that ...?

P.S Love all the inner turmoil. You really hit the bulls eye with this depiction of Severus!

i absolutely love ur story. the characters seem so real to me, and poor Harry having to put up with this as**ole Severus. But im just waiting until Sev crack, that is something worth waiting for

I like seeing someone waiting for Snape for once in the fanfiction universe.

Usually the shoe is on the other foot, and Snape has to weather abuse and threat of abuse from "Harry's friends" or other "well meaning acquaintences" who promise unspecified harm to Snape if he hurts poor lil Harry's feelings and leaves/splits up with him. Really, they never approve, why don't they bribe him to leave, hmm?

I love that you have Harry trying his hardest not to be offended, even when Snape means to offend him. And I also love that you give Snape his due as a spy and erstwhile detective, sneaking and peeking and drawing his own conclusions instead of having him parroting someone else's ideas, or worse, accepting what he's been told as a given.

Oh wow, Severus really has a nack for saying the worst things possible to Harry - he must be sooo close to breaking. I wonder, if he will break down in front of Severus any time soon...