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by starcrossedkayla

person J
schedule December 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Your welcome! Hope my reviews aren't getting annoying. I'm enjoying the role reversal, now Severus wants it but can't get it, which is only fair for the moment after what he did to Harry. Harry finally has control and he seems very much to know it.
schedule December 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sweet Merlin, loooved it!!!
person J
schedule December 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent some progress is being made. And an interesting plot twist on the nature of Severus's condition, now I wonder why he did that?
person J
schedule December 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Indeed it did he's finally got the idea and it's about time too. He'finally got the idea that the relationship is REAL. Shame that The straw has been pilled onto Harry recently so that this is likely the piece of straw that broke Harry's back and his tolerance for this.

Some interesting directions for you to go on if Severus has really changed, I look forward to it.
person seraphiccandy21
schedule December 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
beautiful. Just beautiful. The way it all just seamlessly comes together...and what excellent use of le petit prince. Loved that book. Read it for teh first time only a year ago( in German mind).I could have pointed out to Sev that the answer was with harry but he has to make the same mistake again...just like in that movie...erm, Eternal sunshine of the something mind. You know the one... anyway, that last chapter really made me cry.Was sitting here with tears in my eyes. Simply lovely. Very moving.
Oh and P.S. Just so you know. It is linguistically speaking impossible for somebody to learn French up to the level that harry seems to have mastered it as language fosilisation takes place after 14 years old or so. Not that it couldn't be mastered up to a certain level per se but he seems to be able to speak it to well for a few years of instruction( I presume he could already speak it when he got together with Severus). Just my 2 cents and 2 years of linguistics classes that were, apparently ,not a complete waste ^_^
schedule December 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, oh. Now I start regretting wishing for Harry to be done with Snape's treatment...
I hope they start talking... Loved the chapter!!!
schedule December 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, Harry really had too much. Loved it!
person J
schedule December 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
And a good thing too. As Harry himself pointed out, he can't walk all over Harry and expect to get away with it. Still enjoying it and seeing some more hints of the man Severus was and hopefully will become.
schedule December 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm still reading... growing more and more disgusted with Severus with every passing chapter (as i'm sure i'm meant to? LOL). Especially after that one. *growls* I very rarely say this, but poor Harry. To put yourself in that position, where you love somebody and to have it all disappear into something as menacing as Severus has become... *shiver*

As ever, hanging on for more. I really love your writing style.
person J
schedule December 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok now this has finally got Snape realising just how far from his perception the world really is. Then again, if committing an act just a little bit away from rape doesn't snap him out of self delusion then nothing will. Harry has been helpful all the way, and while I hope this gets fixed, this will take a lot more than just a quick apology. It would be interesting if this Severus in one way or another actually encountered the one Harry knows and somehow it would a pleasant encounter for the one now. Still fascinating story keep em coming!