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Wow, loved this story! Really loved it :D

that was great!!! just fantastic! I will never read another fanfic again cos I will always compare it to this one and it will just not measure up ^_^lol! Hope u write some more soon!
P.S the other Severus must have been planning to use that spell for some time considering the whole house foundations and teh gardens...perhaps even before he fell for Harry?

TThis was simplely fantastic. You are a superb writer and this is an excellent and very moving story.

Yay, looooved :D

Is that the ending? It's very sweet after all those arguments and misunderstandings. I love your stories because they seem so well thought out (good spelling and grammar are a bonus too lol) Also when will you update NoG?

So that why I got deja-vu when I read the ending, you had already posted this story. I was wondering why some of it felt familiar. Still good story, hope all my reviewing didn't get too annoying.

I first want to start off by saying I'm what I like to call a "hummingbird" reader. I tend to flit from series to series, pairing to pairing, without many stories catching my interest. I'll read something from the Originals one day, get bored and move to the Harry Potter series, then a couple of anime titles, Avatar: the Last Airbender, Harry Potter again, and so on (and I'll have a "flavor of the week" pairing for all fandoms). Nothing can keep my attention for long, and I often don't get past stories with more than six chapters-- especially if I think the relationships were rushed or forced/way too Out-Of-Character.

With that said, I've been roaming the Harry Potter section for a couple of days and I happened by this fic. It immediately stood out from the others I've read, both in quality of writing and the main storyline. I found myself intrigued from the beginning and gorged myself on the nectar of what you have available, only stopping once when I realized I'd stayed up until an obscenely late hour and needed to be in bed. Not only am I impressed with the detail and the thought you put into what you've written, but I am immensely relieved that you kept Severus at a very realistic mindset. He's the same stubborn, snarky man everyone in the fandom has grown to love, and he's at once complex yet easy to understand from a reader's outside standpoint.

I truly haven't been this captivated by a story (not including actual books) in quite a long time, and I was quite disappointed to find that there were no more chapters when I finished Chapter 15. Because of this, I wait with bated breath for the next installment. I know this was originally written as one large piece, and I can see why there was the need to split it up, but I suppose I'm one of the rare few who would like to read it in its entirety if it were elsewhere-- like your livejournal account, or something similar.

Regardless, I look forward to the next update.

--Wir

Awwww....

And their romance was going so well and to be honest, I was hoping those memories would return. Only turns out there are none, unless Snape is wrong which on anything that isn't Harry's personality, he rarely is. Still a good story and I will keep reading of course.

Well, well, well that was san interesting turn. I think any chance of cruelty is over, Severus seems hooked on Harry now and it looks like his memories will return soon, so I am very interested in where the story is going (not that I ever wasn't interested).

YES!!! finally they make up!!

wow so much waitin but it didnt disappoint, it was marvellous! wicked absolutely wonderful!!

hahaha now severus is also as sex-adict as Harry alredy was hahaha, love it. love him, love you.

your story is so much complex, but interesting at the same time, its not too simple but shows how complex life could be if any of us would be in that situation. lov it

by the way of my english is horrible forgive me! its not my birth language hehehe