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for Anachronism

by starcrossedkayla

person Anon
schedule February 28, 2016 at 12:00 AM
This is perfection. Thanks for the story.
schedule February 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM
So just discovered this. My - must admit am am pleased with this pairing, not many can actually stay true to the charachters. It is a fascinating blotline thus far (I´m at chapter 6 now) I absolutely LOVE the portrait - omfg, that´s so funny. One is acting like Severus and the other like Harry, it´s so well thought of. Poor Severus for losing his happy memories, but poor, poor Harry for having to go through this kind of pain, it´s like losing his love, yet, he´s still there, and not, at the same time. Can´t wit to finish this. I just finished another of your stories, I will review that later, when I am done hating you for that awfull ending... hehe
person AzraelJinsei
schedule September 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Why did the one Sev try and get more power?
Thank you very much for writing this. I really enjoyed reading it.
schedule June 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying this immensely! Well written. I like how you embellish the characters without making them seem less themselves. Only on chapter 5 and very much looking forward to the rest of it
person Shine
schedule January 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So, okay. This story was just amazing. Thank you for writing it and sharing it. Thank you for putting in the subtle-at-first references to The Little Prince (which I have only ever read in English, but cherish just the same). Thank you for not having Severus or Harry become pregnant just because they are magical wizards. Thank you for giving it a happy and satisfying end.

And I almost rushed off to write this part as soon as I encountered this scene in the story - Severus' first "solo sex" (for lack of a more graceful term) scene, while he thinks about Harry, was possibly the hottest thing I've ever read. Thank you for making this fic very Severus-centric - Harry gets to be the center of our focus in the canon, and I love it when fanfiction brings other characters to the front.
person helga hinkeypunk
schedule January 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You rocked the house!
person Meg
schedule November 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story was so good that I had to have a smoke break after reading it. I just .. Wow. Seriously, I usually like to leave more in my comments, but I'm in awe. Amazing. Just so much wow.
person Darkless
schedule August 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I laughed, I cried....I angsted all over the place. And I am totally flabbergasted with the truth: that Severus is not the true Severus, that this is not his world. At least he's smart enough not to ignore love wherever you find it.

Another totally unique plot/storyline. Just wow. Thank you for posting this amazing story. I loved it!!
person darrena
schedule February 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow... Brilliant story!!! I'm trying to read it for a few months now, but I just didn't have the time. I'm soooo glad that I sqeezed it in my program and read it yesterday. It' s very original ( like the rest of your stories... I especially enjoyed very much A Bunny Tale... hint hint about a 3rd part :p ). Anyway, I enjoyed Anachronism very very much. I loved the ending. I also loved the idea that Severus' soul travelled accross dimentions. You really are a great writter. There are few stories that are written so lovely as you write yours. Keep it up!
schedule January 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
one of the nicest things in fan fiction nowadays is probably when certain plot short cuts turn out to be something different. - memory loss i. e., - but in this story it's not a plot device to ensure romantic beginnings but the introduction to a very promising and complex mystery.

it's lovely as well that harry is grown up and that severus is an unpleasant person - not very romanticized :)