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by Nghtcrwlr

schedule June 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was quite hot indeed! I'm looking forward to more soon!
schedule June 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Finished reading all of what you have so far. My first review was for the first chapter. I'm quite shocked! I hope things work out for poor Kiki.
person circe266
schedule December 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Evil Lucius! It was nice to see Kiki get a tiny bit of revenge on Snape.

Is her morning nausea what I think it is?? That is an interesting twist! Maybe Snape would actually be pleased about it?

Maybe Malfoy could tell the Dark Lord about Snape's new pet, and force him to bring her to a Death Eater meeting?

Thanks for keeping the story going.
person hotgoose
schedule December 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow! really interesting chapter, please let us know what happens soon
person circe266
schedule December 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, will she decide to drink the potion?! (I hope so . . .) Your Snape is deliciously evil. I can't wait to see where you are going with this.

Thanks for another hot chapter!
person hotgoose
schedule November 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
really hot! And really well written
Please keep it coming