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I'm really liking this! I like that you aren't jumping right in to them suddenly liking each other and that you are taking the time to develop the characters and their situation. Very nicely done. I look forward to reading more :)

so far, very good. please continue

I really like how you're writing this so far and the background you've given each of the characters. It doesn't seem stereotypical and I like that you've twisted the characters interactions with each other - not so much that they seem TOO far out of character, but unusual and interesting nonetheless.
I'd really love to see more of this story, so I hope this encourages you to update more! I'm looking forward to new chapters :D

love it! Update soon!

enjoying this. Can't wait for the next chapter

He doesn't know that what he is looking is in front of his eyes........... Wonderful!

Hi :) I just read all of this story at once. Gotta say it's an interesting story so far. Not completely original, there are other "going back to Hogwarts" stories out there. What's so interesting about yours is that you are focusing on several characters. You have created a bunch of characters that differ from canon a bit but are still very believable. I like that you have lumped them all together in a sort of separate "house" it's a good way to get interaction.

There's several things I'm not clear on (although it is about 3am for me, that could be why). What's the deal with Harry and Hermione? I'm guessing that while they were horcrux hunting and Ron had run off something happened between them. It seems Hermione feels like she would be the one that would get all the blame for whatever it was.

I'm not clear on why Draco killed the muggle. Was it afer the war? I think the way you have him acting is very clever. He knows he did wrong and that he has to live with it. The panic attack was great.

Harry seems to be quite anger filled, especially towards all members/former members of Slytherin.

I think there were a couple of spelling/grammar errors in the first few chapters. I don't remember there being any in later chapters. Your plot is engaging and what I've seen so far I like.

I will definitely be keeping an eye out for more updates. Well done :)

Loved!

Hi there,

I just read the whole thing to this point and I am really intrigued. I can tell you aren't a Harry, Ron or (especially) Ginny fan. lol I like your Blaise and your Pansy makes me think of mine. :-) I look forward to seeing more of this story really soon! Thank you, HG4eva

yay, loved!