rate_review Reviews

This was smokin'. And I am soooo mad at you for pulling it our from under me! No seriously, I loved it. And I'm glad you're letting them build up the relationship, and not jump to the smex immediately.

Narcissa was amazing. I don't like her. Infact, I hate her. But also, I pitied her. Being so controlled by first her husband, and then betrayed and controlled by her own son. Draco's feelings in the entire scene were so believable, I keep forgetting they aren't real.

So for waking emotions, great job!

Crist. i do believe this is the best sex scene I've ever read. It was so beautiful. The scene in the shower, Draco's despair, Harry insisting... Amazing. And I love how it was Harry who started it, not Draco who pushed him to it. Too often people portray it so the vampire just 'takes' his partner, and the other person enjoys it despite not really wanting to.

Truly brilliant.

I'm so sorry I haven't commented in a long time, I just got so caught up.

And I have to say, this is horrible. Your writing is wonderful, but this is so sad! I'm crying already, and I can't shake the feeling that this will only get worse! Omg, they can't really kill Harry, can they?

I HATE HERMIONE!

How can she say such things to Harry! That bitch, trying to make Harry believe Draco doesn't love him!!

I loved Ron's reaction though. You bring forth that he is not a bad guy, though he is temperamental.

Oh my god... I do hope you did not do what I think you did. I'm glad the next chapter is already published 'cause the cliffie is unbearable!

There is little I have left to say.

This was horrible. Increadibly sad. Heartbreaking. I'm crying my eyes out. And it's still the best fanfic I have ever read.

Your characterization of Draco was amazing. I also enjoyed Harry's Pov very much. The emotions were all so real, so tangliable, so genuine that it hurts. I am also very pleased with your portrayal of Hermione and Ron (though I do still despise Hermione). You make them into real human beings, who are maybe a little selfish and thickheaded, but they care deepy for Harry ad only want his best. Too many authors seem determined on making Herm and Ron the bad guys, I'm glad you didn't.

In conclusion, all I can say is bravo. I do hope that you continue to write so I can have this amazing experience again. You are one of the most tallanted writers I have ever encountered.

Sincerely, D.

I really liked this story but I noticed that you said things along the lines of "Draco found it hard to breathe", when vampires don't breathe. Also, they do bleed but it doesn't kill them and they can't be in direct sunlight so Draco wouldn't be able to sit on the roof until morning. The main bone of contention for me was the fact that Draco studies himself in the mirror but vampires don't have reflections!
I'm sorry to moan about these but they are pretty big points and you should know your creatures inside-out if you're going to write a creaturefic. Aside from the above points, I really did enjoy the story and the ending was so sad! x

Dear DrarryForever-x: I'm glad you liked my fic, but I thought I'd respond to your review, just in case you might ever read this comment.

You do have a good point on what is usually thought to be 'known' about vampires. As far as I am concerned though, vampires are fiction and writers do tend to put their own spin on things. I actually did a quite thorough search on vampires, so if we're going to talk 'facts' about vampires, I am willing to.

For instance, they are not even pale; their skin is dark red (scientifically because the body is decaying), and people used to believe that they became red because they drank blood. Their eyeballs are also swollen and red, and their voice is nothing but a low wailing sound. But none of this would be very attractive at all, now would it?

Besides, since vampires are dead they aren't supposed to have any bloodflow, right? So why does no one complain about a vampire getting an erection?

OMGOMGOMGOMG Loved the story, Crying but loved it. Why did you have to kill Draco. *sad* it's ok, Still loved it, every once in awhile we all need to read a story with a not so happy ending. Can't wait to read what ever else you write.