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March 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love the story so far, I can't wait to see where you go with it. The only downfall is, I wish the chapters were a lil bit longer. Keep updating!!!
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December 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
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December 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Mother of God! What a twist!~... and think that I have to wait until the next chapter comes around that is so unfair... LOL
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November 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow that was awsome ..please please update soom i would love to read more .. later for now
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November 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok! We need more and pls tell us who is the third wheel here... I am duing of curiosity.. LOL
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November 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Let me get this straight. Inteligent girl hears from her lover's friend information she didn't like, jumps on conclusions, behaves against logic, and drops all fault on a guy who didn't know anything. It's just me or this Hermione behaves idiot (I understant she is OOC, but you took it so far).
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November 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
He is a jerk. His reasons for not looking for her I do not know them but to be honest their are not good enough. Well this only calls for more details... shall we?
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November 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
With their behavior explained your story loks better. Good work.
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November 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey, love the premise.... just a word of constructive criticism-- It helps to put a space in between when a new person starts talking, makes it easier to follow, and figuring out who's saying what. That being said, I really hope you continue cuz I think you've got some great ideas to play with. Especially with Sirius in leather pants!!! MMM! :P Really, I always think of adult Sirius as looking more like the lead singer of The Weird Sisters at the Yule Ball in the fourth movie. YUM!!!! (also like naughty-school-girl-Hermy! He-he :)
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November 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok this is intresting... assuming had never get anyone to the right conclusion....