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for Bastardy/Opportunity

by Lomonaaeren

person MzPurpleMist
schedule April 8, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I rarely read HP fanfics after the end of the War and Harry's out of school because they've never caught my interest. Sort of the same eye-rolling boring, cliché filled formulas that everyone else has written. This was brilliant and now I just may have to sort through the rest of your fanfics to find more treasures like this one.
schedule December 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Well, I for one am glad you were a bastard Draco!
schedule November 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Gotta hand it to Draco! He know how to get what he wants!
schedule November 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I tried to review this once and the computer ate it. So I'll try again. :)

I don't often read Harry/Draco fic, but every once in a while, I get an urge to. Stories like this one are the reason. I love your writing style. The way you describe facial expressions and movements is so precise and vivid that it's almost like watching a movie. That's a rare talent, in my opinion.

I can't say that I found the characters to be completely canon-friendly, but I didn't mind the changes at all. I've never been a huge fan of the Weasleys anyway, so I didn't mind the "bashing" at all. Thank you for it. :D

You're a very good writer and I look forward to reading more of your fic. Thanks!
person SP777
schedule November 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Now, THAT was interesting!

It was almost like a battle of wills between 2 strong minded
individuals, with the keener mind winning the battle.

Anyway, Harry does impress me as someone who goes along with
what everyone else says and never speaks up against those
who are his friends unless he's mad.

Not a good thing, holding things inside until they explode.

All in all, I like that Harry is doing what HE wants for a change.
person Elphaba
schedule November 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh I like this one. Great job!
person Mia
schedule November 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I found this to be enchantingly hilarious. I love the way you write Harry right out of the Ginny ship. It is reasonable and a pov I never even saw or considered until I started reading you. You are startlingly brilliant and I love you. A lot. You may want to look into restraining orders a lot. Thank you for sharing your most excellent writing. It is infinitely entertaining.

~Mia
person Rumi
schedule November 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was an enjoyable story. Initially I didn't like Draco, he was a bit pathetic in how he was stalking Harry, but he grew on me. I like how Harry finally discovered his backbone, but what I loved about the story was this statement:

"Roddy stared at Draco in disbelief, his eyes popping with an audible sound.
person arealdeal
schedule November 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
how the f...ck do you do that in a one shot???? Most would take a 30 chapter go to even come close to the depth you get to in one go. Love ya!!!!
person MewMew2
schedule November 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very well done. Excellent job on both Harry and Draco's character growth/characterization in this one. Bravo!