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for If You Dare

by Harcopotfoy

schedule November 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That....was very hot. I'm not really much of a hp fan, but I enjoyed this one a lot. The torture was beautiful ^_^ very well written.
schedule November 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow I liked that quite a lot but you have to make him do Harry again while he's coherent !
I don't know if you intend the story to be something along the darker lines or if you will lighten the mood somewhat by making their encounters become more and more consencual I think I'd like it both ways !
Anyways good start I hope you'll update soon and I like your writing style.
Keep up the good work!

*hugs*
MD
schedule November 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, until the end I was wondering what's the dare, and then it was so simple. Loved!