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Wow... just, freakin' wow. I almost didn't read your story, but how could I not when it sucked me in from the very beginning! How beautiful and well constructed. I absolutely love it!!!!!!! Please write more and more and more!!!!!!!!

ai there mate, lovely story You left lots to the imagination and kept it relax i like that. Good job you should make one with the younger snape story that ought to be interesting/

Loved the end, was a bit surprised (okay in hindsight not really) when Snape Sr. fooled himself. would love to see what Snape thinks when he sees her again. great story!

okay i kinda fell behind with the reading, but i have finished now. i totally love the story so far cause face it that cant really be the end you have so much more to tell us. like how they (hermione & severus-present)meet and what happens see if everything worked out in the end, like if mops finally gets her wish and has little baby snapes to watch over. does severus ever really forgive himself for what he did or does or what ever! :) i am dying here aren't you going to tell us more--please!!! :) though i so loved everything that has happened so far! so do post more or maybe a sequel to the story!

So freaking awesome!!!!! Another work very well done!!! Thanks for all your hard work!!!! Stimpy :)

The end?

I'd be positively throwing a tantrum at this point if I believed for one second a story like this would allow you to simply walk away at this point. So, unless you're a glutton for punishment (by plot Hippogriffs, not me!)...

I'd start writing if I were you. Like, NOW. lol

Aww no it can't be over! I love it! It's great! Junior needs to learn not to just barge in lol!

The End?! This story was definately too good to be only 7 chapters long. I hope you will find some inspiration for a sequel because this was such a lovely and original fic and I would love to read more.

Wow. Intelligent, realistic, and interesting. The idea-- Snape having to defend his wife against a younger version of himself-- is fascinating on its own. You went a step further and fleshed everything out very realistically. I loved your characterization of both the Snapes. It was interesting, seeing their dynamic, especially since they're the same person. I can see exactly why Snape would hate his old self. I liked the comparison of Lily with Hermione. The Muggleborn fetish made sense, though I guess I'd never thought about it like that before.

Overall, a very nice fic with surprising depth, and leavened with some humor. :) Very nice job.

Is it REALLY the end?! I loved this fic!