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schedule July 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love the idea of an assassin Harry, but the character you've written seems a little unsure as to his own motives. He says he's tasted blood and doesn't want to be good anymore, but then he says "the people we do kill are well deserving of the methods we may or may not use." So, he's got a bloodlust and doesn't want to be good, but he only kills altruisticly?

It would be more believable if this Unknown Organisation fulfilled contracts regardless of whether or not the victim deserved it. Harry's not very evil if he only kills bad guys, right?
schedule November 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really love this fic. I think it's because of the cold way that Harry acts about killing and torturing people :) I was also wondering if this is a one shot or if you plan on continuing it because I would love to see how this progresses :)