rate_review Reviews

I really enjoy the pithy Draco/Hermione conversations. So much is packed into so few words. He really has her hooked! Typo alert though: Her nights were "quite" should be quiet. Also a quibble: it was firmly made quite clear to me in my youth that the past tense of sneak is sneaked, NOT snuck. I don't think that has changed in the past unmentionable number of years (though you would never know it from its prevalence in fanfiction, where I usually let it pass). Would you like to get a second opinion from a Beta/grammarian? Anyway, keep up the good work.

More, more, more, more, more, MORE PLEASE!!!!! I loved this fic, it pushed all the right buttons!!! Please update soon i need to know what happens...... and soon!!
xoxo

seems interesting but please fix the spacing...it's so hard to read.

I like it. Please keep going!