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for Cleansing Rain

by MorningStar777

person kazfeist
schedule November 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I liked this....the length was just about right. I liked the happy ending, and the action-filled battle scene. A plausible reason for their turning to the Light was given, too. :D
person jreel08
schedule November 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love the story. I think that this story has great potential to become longer. A suggestion would be to play off of Draco's own comment about needing more time til getting married. You could write more chapters were Hermione get impatient or maybe Draco wants to get married at a bad time in her life.

Overall, I love the story. Good job. I hope to read more chapters with this.

Also, as a small note. You misspelled Lucius. Other than that, again. good job.