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by belladonnanoir

schedule November 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OH I so cannot wait for the next chapter. Update soon please!
schedule November 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, the premise is good. I like that he would have opened up to a female more so than a male, but this moved SOOO fast. I would have believed he could have opened up to her a little and not tried to kill her like he did Harry; but I just wouldn't trust an instant about-face. There was an evil dark lord holding the life of his family hostage, there was no precedent for him to be able to trust her with so little conversation and no catalyst other than walking into the ladies room at the right time.
schedule November 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like this story, your a very good writer. Please update.
person alm1067
schedule November 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think this is a great start. Please keep up the good work. I like how you paired up Hermione and Draco. I also like how you got him to ask for help and that she was willing to help no matter their past.
schedule November 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm soooo excited.