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November 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Bravo! :D That was a very good story. I think it was completely plausible that they got together that way, given the crap we Harmony lovers now have to work around thanks to the "Like a sister" thing in DH. Their reactions were lovely, and I think very accurate. Thank you for sharing this with us!
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November 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay I have to say that I am throughly impressed. You captured that first time feeling of wonderment perfectly. I really really admire how you were able to keep the feeling of innocence and almost a purity. You made it just what it ought to have been. A beautiful moment between two people who care for one another immensely. Fantastic, I absolutely adored it and I wouldn't mind more! lol
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November 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very good. A second or third chapter would not be a bad thing.
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November 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Tis was very entertaining. Thank you. Loved it.
liz
liz
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November 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh, my that was sweet and awesome!
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November 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was fantastic. Sweet and hot at the same time, and tightly in character all the way. You really captured a great sense of friendship, curiousity and reciprosity that felt very natural between the two of them. Harry's remorse was genuine, and Hermione's reluctance to believe she was beautiful in his eyes touchingly real. Thanks so much for posting this - you made my night. Love to see you continue it too.
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November 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great story!
continue this one, or write others like it. ^_^
continue this one, or write others like it. ^_^
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November 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well done! You might want to read back through and correct a few spots where you got in a hurry and left a word or two out (I'd point them out myself, but I'm too lazy to go back and find them), but other than that, this was an exceptional story...I'm just so happy that it wasn't Draco/Hermion or slash, thank God.
Keep up the good work
Cid
Keep up the good work
Cid
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November 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What a lovely little one-shot. Harry is just adorable!
I liked the uncomplicated and accepting nature of the relationship here. Gentle and sweet. Not that it wasn't hot. It was. : )
I liked the uncomplicated and accepting nature of the relationship here. Gentle and sweet. Not that it wasn't hot. It was. : )