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for Don't Ignore Me

by Kayrox133

person Serranna
schedule February 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
"Compatible with most brooms, no refunds accepted."

Ha! What a great line! Your seductive scenarios are very creative. And I love the idea of Lucius as a lazy husband. So funny.
schedule February 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
and i'm still here. since when are you not suppose to answer anyone?? i see them on other stories i read....anyway good chapter. love luna and draco getting caught. lol.
person dragon37
schedule January 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit, I had to read both of your stories all the way thru before commenting. I was lost sometimes, but I got past the confussion, and finally got into the story. My most favorite part of your story right now is during the DADA Newts. I loved every word of the chapter, very creative of Hermione.
schedule January 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
very creative with the broom. good chapter.
schedule December 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
pansy is such a loser. great chapter. Merry Christmas!!!!
schedule December 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i don't blame him. who wants to hear about a bad blowjob. and i'm sure he doesn't ever want to remember it. anyway good chapter.
schedule December 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loved the newest chapter. Very sexy & very funny!
person Anon
schedule December 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is such a hot story and i can't wait to read the rest of it.
person circe266
schedule December 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Re: chapter 4

Great chapter! I actually laughed out loud over my computer at Hermione's antics. Good for her . . . and poor Lucius! I love HG/LM stories where Hermione can stand up to Lucius and give as good as she gets.

I can't wait to see how they get together. Please update soon!
schedule November 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please go on. I love their battle of wit and sex.