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April 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Excellent introduction of Severus' character. He must think she's intruding on him!
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April 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I know there is another chapter after this (and thank you once again for your quick updates, by the way), but I had to say thank you. That was sweet and heartbreaking all at once. I am going to say a quick prayer that you're a happy ending type of person before I move on to the next chapter. Fingers crossed and off to read...
HG4eva
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April 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Whew! It seems you are my type of person! I am not much of a fan of realism in my fiction. lol I know it will take them a while to begin anew, but I am so glad they will get the chance. Crossing my fingers that he learns to step outside of his comfort zone and she learns to fight for what she wants. Thank you! HG4eva
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April 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
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April 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this is great. can't wait to read more.
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April 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The scene where Severus shows up at the door with Hermione's letter was just excellent. At last they seem to be getting their act together...yay!
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April 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the double chapter update! Glad to see him take the news well and that his meeting with Hermione and Donovan was so natural! I liked how you worked Harry's realisation and acceptance in there. I can imagine him now being a better friend and advisor to Hermione, especially now that Severus is determined more than ever to have Hermione and now Donovan in his life. Can't wait to see what Severus does next!
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April 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*Bursts into cheers with confetti and streamers!!!* YES! YEEEES! Well done! He finally knows and is finally getting a family! I hope that he and Hermoine can manage to fall in love all over again! Lol. Good writing! Bring on more soon!
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April 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the two chapters! At least everything is cleared up, and hopefully they will work things out sans angst! Looking forward to the next chapters! Grace
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April 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Finally he does something right! You have redeemed him which after all that has gone on has been quite the feat. Its lovely to see everyone playing nicely for the time being. Looking forward to the update, have a happy holiday if you celebrate it and wll done!!!!