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November 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
Always love your stories.
Always love your stories.
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November 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ron & Harry's behaviour isn't surprising - now that Harry doesn't need her to play research whore and Ron has alternative places to stick his prick and Ginny already has ensnared the BWL, what use is she to her former friends?
I bet the only way anyone is talking about her, if they are talking about her, is how she went into hiding the moment she heard of Harry's engagement and was therefore in love with him. Which means that Weaslette Jr & Sr will be even less welcoming of her if she chooses to return. And most people will be muttering at the sheer audacity of a plain Mudblood to think she could ever be worthy of the Great Hero and others encouraging Ginny to keep checking Harry's food and drink for love potions that the jilted brunette could place. Ewwwwww.
As for the lack of reviews - are you honestly surprised? FFNET readers are five times more likely to review a fic, and not just because there are more of them. AFFNET insists on you having to enter some word (Captcha) even if you're already logged in. It's very annoying.
And AFFNET doesn't have story alerts, which makes it difficult to follow a story. You might want to consider posting this somewhere else with story alerts, like FFNET or Petulant Poetess (though its story alert system is generally only discovered by accident).
I would have preferred longer chapters. But I'm not the one putting effort into writing this story for free in my spare time.
I bet the only way anyone is talking about her, if they are talking about her, is how she went into hiding the moment she heard of Harry's engagement and was therefore in love with him. Which means that Weaslette Jr & Sr will be even less welcoming of her if she chooses to return. And most people will be muttering at the sheer audacity of a plain Mudblood to think she could ever be worthy of the Great Hero and others encouraging Ginny to keep checking Harry's food and drink for love potions that the jilted brunette could place. Ewwwwww.
As for the lack of reviews - are you honestly surprised? FFNET readers are five times more likely to review a fic, and not just because there are more of them. AFFNET insists on you having to enter some word (Captcha) even if you're already logged in. It's very annoying.
And AFFNET doesn't have story alerts, which makes it difficult to follow a story. You might want to consider posting this somewhere else with story alerts, like FFNET or Petulant Poetess (though its story alert system is generally only discovered by accident).
I would have preferred longer chapters. But I'm not the one putting effort into writing this story for free in my spare time.
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November 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Its been so long since we've heard from you! This is a great start it surely has me intrigued. Can absolutely not wait for more. However I will. Well done!!!
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October 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving this story so far neelix! Course I always loved all the stories you have posted :)
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October 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am totally intrigued by your new story, as usual well written:-))I like how you portrait Hermione and her feelings around the war, I find it very belivable compared to all that happy celebrating when so many lives were lost. While I do think Harry and Ron are prats for their behaviour towards her, I like how it pinpoint my feelings: Hermione have always been a better and more faithful friend towards Harry and Ron than either of them have been towards her. And, Harry migth be the "boy-saviour", but more often than not, in Harry's world, what Harry thinks and feels are the most important and often the only correct way to do so.
Yup, I liked this so far, I look forward to read more.
Yup, I liked this so far, I look forward to read more.
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October 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ooohhhh i am soo very intrigued by this story!! more please!!! i always love your stories, short or long =] but i am glad this one seems like it's going to be a long one =]
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October 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting start. I'm feeling bad for Hermione, she seems so isolated right now. Your set up of the situation is spot on I would say. While the Weasley's treated her well, it seemed to me that Molly always favored Harry and didn't treat Hermione with the same warmth.
It sounds like Harry's not even telling her about his engagement to Ginny before a public announcement came down, was the last straw for her, like she just packed up and left her past behind.
Looking forward to reading more. :)
It sounds like Harry's not even telling her about his engagement to Ginny before a public announcement came down, was the last straw for her, like she just packed up and left her past behind.
Looking forward to reading more. :)
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October 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is off to a sad but lovely start. It seemed clear in canon that Hermione was less of a Weasley than Harry, so it makes sense that she would be forgotten in the war's aftermath (not to mention Harry and Ron have proved to be real insensitive gits at times). Looking forward to how this develops...